M Genesis Duology Volume 1 C H Will Books
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Mary is a southern girl living life large in the big city of Chicago. She has everything she could ever want. Everything except a man to share it with, that is. When she is dumped by yet another boyfriend, her best friend introduces her to the world of Female Dominance and Male Chastity. This world is a new concept to Mary and one that she finds intriguing, despite being raised in a staunch Catholic family. The more she researches the topic the more interested she becomes in the prospect of locking a man up for her own. As she embarks on a new relationship, she struggles with the desire to utilize chastity. While she likes the new man that has entered her life, she begins to find many similarities to the others that have come and gone before him. She is left feeling that this relationship will just follow the path of the preceding ones. Resolute, she decides to bring about a change in order to save this relationship. She is certain that chastity is the best answer. Through this, she is determined to teach a man to be the best mate for any woman. The only question that remains is can she ask such a thing of him and will he accept this new role?
M Genesis Duology Volume 1 C H Will Books
Excellent story that's very well written. It really hit home in places. It strikes a great balance between sex story and life happening.Product details
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M Genesis Duology Volume 1 C H Will Books Reviews
A little verbose at times, this was still very captivating and well worth the time. Quality writing in this genre is very hard to find and this is one of the best ones I have found. The story between Mary and Stuart is well-developed and there is no lack of emotional depth from Mary's side. It's a bdsm love story with a heart and a brain and not too extreme in its kink factor. Needs a little editing but I still give it five stars based on its length. Hopefully there will be a book 2 somewhere down the line.
What should have taken one chapter, two at most to get the background going took a ridiculous amount of the book. The storyline didn't seem to start picking up the pace til close to 3/4 of the way through. I found the main character very unlikable. She came across as very judgemental, selfish, spoiled, petty and self righteous. I kept thinking that the guy deserved to find someone much better than her, that he was most definitely settling for third rate, not that he was perfect by any means!
In addition a major edit needs to be done. The narration is in the completely wrong tense through the entire book. Very frustrating to read.
On a very minor note, the author did not seem to do any or at least, very little research into the subject of chastity.
First of all, let me say that I received a copy of M Genisis in exchange for an honest review.
Wow! The description of this book grabbed me right away. I'm a female submissive and have read many books about female subs and their Doms/Masters, but this book is about Mary, a good southern Catholic girl, who after being dumped by her boyfriend, learns about male submission, more correctly, male chastity. Mary has a friend who has her boyfriend "locked up." She's intrigued by this idea and starts to do some research on the subject of Keyholders and Masters, or Female Dominance and Male Chastity. She starts thinking that maybe she can find a man to lock up and teach him a thing or two about pleasing a woman. Stuart comes into her life and she starts comparing him to all the other men who have eventually exited her life, thinking he will be the same as all the others. She decides that chastity and training her man is the way to go. But will he go for it?
I have to say that I like the second part of this book way better than I did the first part. The first part seemed overly descriptive with some words being very repetitive. While reading the beginning chapters, it just seemed to drag and I thought to myself, 'Where is this going?" What does any of this have to do with male chastity?' However, much of what's written in the first half is explained and brought together in the second half of the book. But let me tell you...the second half of the book makes up for the first half! I loved reading about the training. There were some very funny parts in M Genesis, as well as some things that were sad. This book is not overly full of sex scenes; there's an actual story to follow. But the sex scenes that are there are very hot and DIFFERENT! They had me squirming!
My biggest issue with this book was that it was written mostly in the narrative third person point of view. Then it would switch occasionally to dialog. I do suggest to the author that there be much more dialog in the next book. I did love the inclusion of the internet chats, though. Those or texting just seem to add a bit of "realness" to the story, and I think they are a cute addition. The book is a very good length for the money. There were some absent or misplaced commas, some wrong verb tenses, some words repeated too often in close proximity, and some misspelled and misused words. None of these things took away from the story, however. Over all, this book is well worth the read and totally different from much of the erotica out there. AND I've gotta read more! Please let there be a HEA for Mary and Stuart! Happy Ever After)
Excellent story that's very well written. It really hit home in places. It strikes a great balance between sex story and life happening.
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